Sunday 5 January 2014

Chapter 6 - Just In Time



In this story, The Loave Family arrived at Sunlit Tides for a holiday. 



John:
"Hey kids wake up. We are here."

 Terry: 
"This place is lovely. What do you think kids?" She asked her kids.

Jake:
"This place is wonderful!"

Jane:
"I love it!"

Terry: 
"Look at the full moon. It will get dark soon."
John: 
They finally arrived to their holiday house.
"Here is our holiday house kids. Lets start unpacking kids."

Jane:
"It looks great, except the floor has a missing tile."

John:
"I thought... Darn Real Estates!"
John was little bit crossed. 
John:
"This house looks great. I paid off the mortgage and it's ours!"



Terry:
They walked inside the lounge room and they loved the interior. 
"What a nice lounge room. Want a care of a drink kids?" She asked.

Jane:
"Yes please mum"

Jake:
The kids sat down on the stools.
"Can I have a beer mum?"
Terry:
"Jake. You're too young to have a beer. Who told you to have a beer? Lets have banana smoothie instead."

Jane:
"Yes please mum!"

Jake:
"Okay then."
Jane:
"Haha.. Jake, you can't drink beer. You're not even 21 years old yet"
Jane laughed 

Jake:
"I was just joking."



Jane, Jake & Terry were drinking their banana milkshake at the bar. John was cooking a dinner tonight and it was time to eat.

John:
"dinner is ready everybody."
John called them
Jake:
"What are we having tonight dad?"
Jake asked.
John:
"We are having spaghetti tonight."
John answered.








Everybody were on their seats ready to eat their spaghetti.
John:
"So... How's the holiday house? Do you like it?"
John asked Terry.





Terry:
"This house looks wonderful. It's like a tropical house."
She answered.






Terry:
"What do you think about this house Jake?"
Terry asked Jake.







Jake:
Jake coughed.
"Sorry mum, I can't talk right now. You know I can't talk with my mouth full!"






Jane:
"Mum, you can't stop him eating. He's was really hungry in the car before. "
Jane told Mum. 







Terry:
"I think I swallowed a meatball pretty bad"
Terry coughed.

Jane:
"Don't talk with your mouth full mum."



Mitzi came into the dining room and she was hungry for food. She was calling for food.








Terry threw her meatball on the floor to feed Mitzi.








Terry:
"Did you know all of you there's going to be my birthday tomorrow."
Terry reminded all of them.






The kids both coughed.
Jane:
"Err, what did you say mum?"
Jane asked.






John:
"Tomorrow...."
John was thinking what to say.








John:
"Oh yeah... tomorrow is your birthday. Do you know it will be her birthday tomorrow kids?"
John asked to his kids.







Jake:
Jake finished his dinner
"Oh yes... I won't forget about your birthday mum."

Terry:
"Thanks Jake, what about you Jane?"
Terry asked to Jane

Jane:
"Yes mum..."
Jane asked.
John finished his dinner and he heard munching in the kitchen.
John:
"Who's eating in the kitchen?"
John asked.





John:
"Oh it's Mitzi, What are you doing in the kitchen eating the meatball?"

Terry:
"Oh, sorry honey, I fed her."



Jake:
Jake starred at the fish tank.
"Man, I love this fish tank."







John saw his daughter Jane washing the dishes.
John:
"You're so helpful Jane."







Jane:
"Thanks dad. I love to clean. That's my special trait."
Jane smiled. 








John:
"You know there's a spa at the back. We should try it out."







Terry:
"I didn't know we have a spa at the back. I didn't see it. I love this holiday house and thanks for doing this."






They both kissed in the kitchen.
Terry:
"I love you John.

John:
"I love you too Terry."



Jane was watching mum and dad kissing each other.
Jane:
"They're making out again!"






Jake:
Jake looked at her sister.
"Jane... Are you okay?"

Jane:
"Oh.. whoops, what are we talking about?"
Jane lost the subject.


Jake:
"You know about this place. We should make a nice birthday party for mum."







Jane:
"That's a really good idea Jake!"








Jane:
"But... Where will mum's birthday party held at?"
Jane asked.







Jane:
"There are a lot of wonderful places in this town."








Jane:
"Will it be a private party or a public party?"
Jane was asking quite a lot of questions.







Jake:
"Slow down Jane. You're getting excited here. It must be a private party and we do not want to cause any trouble. We haven't met any people yet in this place. Anyway Dad can look for a good place to book a lot somewhere near at the beach."




Jane:
"Oh the beach. That's a good place."








Jane:
"The party will start tomorrow at night time. It will be beautiful."

Jake:
"It will be Jane. It will."



It was past bed time and it was late.
Terry:
"Kids, it's right past your bedtime."

Jane:
"Yes mum."




Terry was in front of the bed and she couldn't find it.
Terry:
"Where's the bed honey?"

John:
"You're standing in front of it. It's not invisible!"

Terry:
"Oh, my bad!"
Jane:
"Goodnight Jake."

Jake:
"Goodnight Jane."





Jane:
"Just don't tell about this, except Dad. We do not want to spoil it for mum."

Jake:
"I won't Jane. Have a good night sleep."

End of Chapter 6